Research Propsal

Please do explain if the Data Collection Tool can be used.
Also please to read all the comments made my the tutor and correct all that is required so this can be accurate and everything link together.
My questionnaires need to be adjusted over . Please to fix all questions that should be need to ask for the research Topic.
The sampling size that I used is not correct. Please to go ahead and use a valid sampling size that should be able to do the job done
NA: I have not yet received approval from the owner to conduct the research in the community, please to find ways to help me to explain to the tutor that this research will be carried out regardless of the consent from the owner of the Milk River Bath and Spa