Assignment 1

Due Date
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Introduction
For this assignment you will be revising a poorly written email.
Assignment Instructions
Revise the poorly written email below. Think about formatting, word choice, and business writing etiquette.
To: susan.thorn@xyz.com
CC: advertistingdepartment
Subject: READ THIS! IT IS IMPORTANT!!
Dear Susan, This email is to tell about some stuff that happened in our last meting. Andy was in the meeting to and he was very very pissed off. He was all like “What is Susan doing?” She has no idea what her job is……He stated that Susan messed up the invoice to our biggest client. The client is Facebook. They pay use alot of $$$$ to create commercial ads for their Facebook Live customers.
The manager from FB called to complain last week and WE NEED TO FIX THIS PROBLEM now!
You need to do something a-bot this and it should be fixed right away. Do you have any suggestionssssss on how to fix this??
I need to know what to do!
Please email me or the team back today! Talk to you soon.
(STUDENT NAME)
This assignment must be uploaded as a Word Document (.doc or .docx).