EDIT MY ESSAY

Hello!
i got a response from my supervisor on my written essay and it needs editing before it passes, I need you to edit the essay following the instructions and comments given on it
the other part of the assignment that is missing is Cal by Bernard MacLaverty which i uploaded.
READ THE INSTRUCTIONS FILE (IMPORTANT TO EDIT THE ASSIGNMENT ) + THE MY ESSAY DOC IS MY ESSAY THAT YOU NEED TO EDIT
I ALSO UPLOADED COMPRESSED FILES EACH FOR THE ESSAY ( THE HOUSE OF MANGO STREET NOVEL + CAL NOVEL)
THE CAL NOVEL IS THE PART THAT IS MISSING FROM MY ESSAY AND NEEDS WRITING.
THE HOUSE OF MANGO STREET PART IS ALREADY WRITTEN IN MY ESSAY AND GOT COMMENTS FROM MY SUPERVISOR, YOUR DUTY IS TO SEE IF ANYTHING NEEDS EDITING IN THAT PART OF MY ESSAY.