nursing admission essay

can you please read my essay and add anything you think needs to be added or fixed, i am a mother of 4 kids under the age of 9, i have been working as a nurse aid sinse 2016, i diceded to to become a nurse after getting sick in 2015 when i was pregnant with my second child and i saw how good nurses treated me all of those months i was in the hospital, cantbe more than 300 word no less than 250 please and thank you