Argumentative essay : Teachers should earn the same money as doctors

The essay needs to have:
1.Introductory paragraph
contains some background
information and sufficiently
states the problem
– Source material is used. All sources are accurately documented, but may not always include introduction and comment or skillful synthesis
-Contains an arguable claim.
Thesis and purpose are fairly
clear
.Topic sentences articulate
precise argument and are
logically linked to thesis
2. Most paragraphs unified under the singular main idea of the topic sentence
3
Points are well developed in each paragraph
Author acknowledges the
opposing view, but does not
present sound counterpoint
4
Conclusion summarizes the
writer’s key ideas and mirrors
the thesis statement