Edit my essay

Hello!
i got a response from my supervisor on my written essay and it needs editing before it passes, I need you to edit the essay following the instructions and comments given on it
the other part of the assignment that is missing is Cal by Bernard MacLaverty which i uploaded
the files you need to complete this part are:
1. Eng A Literature Cal
2. Characters_Excerpt from Peck and Col. 2021.pdf
3.
Narration and POV_Excerpt from Norton.pdf
4.
Setting_Excerpt from Norton (1).pdf
5. Theme_Excerpt from Norton. 2020.pdf